YAY

Alrighty then, I found it.

And behind door number 1 is..... a USB drive!!!!!


And on it is a short story that I am currently trying to make un-short. It is based on highschool life, and I want to make it as real as possible. So I will be posting parts of different chapters that I think could lose some cheese and gain some realness.
That's where you come in, please comment and tell me what you think should be done, or just tell me I'm amazing and everything is perfect. Either way, please remember to just comment.
Just to let you think on this, I will post the first chapter piece tomorrow after I get home.